Harvey. Your Powtoon was incredible with many attributes that made it good: the Kayne West, Copyrightinati, and the music that was powerful and dignifying. But there were a couple things that made your Powtoon from GREAT to GOOD. First, there was no narration which was a big penalty that can affect your grade on the rubric (the subtitles were ok I guess, but still). Secondly, at about the 1:30 mark, your slides started to cut off, with little to no information shown on it so that must have bumped your grade down for the information. Besides the narration and cut-off slides, this was a well done presentation!
Harvey. I think your presentation is the most creative one I have seen so far. It was really funny but still kept to the main subject, which is about copyright. But their are some things that may bring down your grade on this project. On of them is that their was no voiceover in your presentation and that will make you lose some serious points. Also about halfway through your powtoon, your slides started to cut off and only show it for two seconds. Even though those things are not in that presentation, you are really creative and this just shows that. This is a pretty good presentation.
This was certainly creative. The only thing you did wrong was you didn't record your voice, it was a big requirement. If you would of done that it would of been better. Overall it was a great presentation and very creative. Good job.
You did a really good job, I can tell you worked hard on the music fitted. your images were really good, and your spelling was good to. I don't thing you mentioned everything you needed to and the ending got really trippy.
Harvey. Your Powtoon was incredible with many attributes that made it good: the Kayne West, Copyrightinati, and the music that was powerful and dignifying. But there were a couple things that made your Powtoon from GREAT to GOOD. First, there was no narration which was a big penalty that can affect your grade on the rubric (the subtitles were ok I guess, but still). Secondly, at about the 1:30 mark, your slides started to cut off, with little to no information shown on it so that must have bumped your grade down for the information. Besides the narration and cut-off slides, this was a well done presentation!
ReplyDeleteHarvey. I think your presentation is the most creative one I have seen so far. It was really funny but still kept to the main subject, which is about copyright. But their are some things that may bring down your grade on this project. On of them is that their was no voiceover in your presentation and that will make you lose some serious points. Also about halfway through your powtoon, your slides started to cut off and only show it for two seconds. Even though those things are not in that presentation, you are really creative and this just shows that. This is a pretty good presentation.
ReplyDeleteThis was certainly creative. The only thing you did wrong was you didn't record your voice, it was a big requirement. If you would of done that it would of been better. Overall it was a great presentation and very creative. Good job.
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job, I can tell you worked hard on the music fitted. your images were really good, and your spelling was good to. I don't thing you mentioned everything you needed to and the ending got really trippy.
ReplyDeletegreat job on the music/pictures, but it would have been better if you had a narration.
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